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It is not the same by ~Dori0:iconDori0:



It's not the same
  (so they say)
   as what I've done
    from day to day
I often jest,
and turn my head
   and laughed upon
     what others have said
And why I do
or why I don't
  it's not the same
    as will or won't
When they say
they do not mean
  to strip my bones
    so completely clean
It's not the same
(so they say)
  as what I've done
    from day to day
Have I hurt you
do I care
  can I lie to you
   do I dare
And still
I stare at this moment
  and clueless to what it means

   I am torment
©2008 ~Dori0
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I am Torment is how I feel most of the time but in this particular case, my fear and panic was very vivid and real.
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~krysohmyz:iconkrysohmyz: Apr 14, 2008, 5:34:34 AM
Oh... that is REALLY scary... (but I'm quite easy to move, theese days...)

..but beautiful... quite insistent tempo, although the verses gives me rather resigned feeling (or maybe even a bit sardonic?)

..I don't know if it's right stance... I just know I really like it...

Kryso

--
Take Your time, think a lot,
think of everything You've got
For You will still be here tomorrow,
but Your dreams may not...
~lenden:iconlenden: Apr 17, 2008, 2:11:47 AM
Wow, mommy, that's both creepy and sad sounding. Very well written in tempo and all that.

--
*nods sagely*